In English writing, repetition is considered to be a bad style. Look at the following example:
Bad: We look forward to your participation when you participate in the event.
Good: We look forward to having you participate in the event.
Can you improve on these sentences?
1 Janice went to the beach, but the beach was cold and windy.
2 I like my job because it is an easy job.
3 Fish is not only tasty, but fish also helps your brain.
4 The dust made the air really dusty.
5 I like chocolate because the taste is really tasty.
6 The teacher teaches us many things.
7 On my travels I traveled to Rome, Milan and Palermo.
8 I have not yet decided on my decision.
9 I spent my holiday in
Timbuktu Timbuktu is a city in . Mali
10 I signed up for a Spanish course. The Spanish course lasts three weeks.
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